Air pollution is a worldwide problem. What is air pollution? It's the introduction of harmful substances or products into the enviroment which can occur naturally orartificiall
y.t here are two types of airpollution (primary )such as vehicle exaust , and secondary such as smog. Air pollution is a dangerous threat caused by many different productions such as: car exhaust, Nitrogen Oxides and has a serious effect on us
The first major cause of air pollution is car exhausts whichformed due to
the production of unburned fuel in the form of oxides of Nitrogen and hydrocarbons. The
Air pollution has wide adverse effects on the environment and man in general. People have no choice but to breathe the air around them regardless of its quality. Symptoms of air pollution exposure include irritation to one’s eyes, throat, and lungs. , headaches, and difficulty breathing are all commonly reported when air quality is poor. in addition to it reduced energy levels , disrupting the balance of nature, and leading to premature death.
Although people have no choice but to breath the air around them, they do have choices that can help them stay healthy. Paying attention to air quality forecasts,
avoiding outside exercise or spending more time inside when ozone levels are high, and supporting measures to improve air quality and reduce sources of pollution are all commendable and health-saving measures. i think that the solution isto save energy by trying to use minimum amountsof natural gas and even electricity, and avoidinf thr use of air conditioner and use afan instead.
Air pollution is a problem that everyone should be concerned about. With the growing number of automobiles, and the greenhouse effect problem becoming more and more of a threat
air,pollution is something to be concerned with
we need to avoid the use of fire crackers that dont really need it to express our feeling of happiness , and also try reusing things such as paper , and plastic bags , this will contribute towards reducing the effects of air pollution and global warming.
y.t here are two types of airpollution (primary )such as vehicle exaust , and secondary such as smog. Air pollution is a dangerous threat caused by many different productions such as: car exhaust, Nitrogen Oxides and has a serious effect on us
The first major cause of air pollution is car exhausts whichformed due to
the production of unburned fuel in the form of oxides of Nitrogen and hydrocarbons. The
second cause of air pollution is Nitrogenoxides. Basically Nitrogen oxide is one of the harmful gases which is produced into the atmosphere due to various humanactivities such as burning of fuel. military activities ara one of the main causes that involve the use of nuclear weaponsthat pollute air.
Air pollution has wide adverse effects on the environment and man in general. People have no choice but to breathe the air around them regardless of its quality. Symptoms of air pollution exposure include irritation to one’s eyes, throat, and lungs. , headaches, and difficulty breathing are all commonly reported when air quality is poor. in addition to it reduced energy levels , disrupting the balance of nature, and leading to premature death.
Although people have no choice but to breath the air around them, they do have choices that can help them stay healthy. Paying attention to air quality forecasts,
avoiding outside exercise or spending more time inside when ozone levels are high, and supporting measures to improve air quality and reduce sources of pollution are all commendable and health-saving measures. i think that the solution isto save energy by trying to use minimum amountsof natural gas and even electricity, and avoidinf thr use of air conditioner and use afan instead.
Air pollution is a problem that everyone should be concerned about. With the growing number of automobiles, and the greenhouse effect problem becoming more and more of a threat
air,pollution is something to be concerned with
we need to avoid the use of fire crackers that dont really need it to express our feeling of happiness , and also try reusing things such as paper , and plastic bags , this will contribute towards reducing the effects of air pollution and global warming.
sorry amany but ur essay is very weak
ردحذفur topic sentences arenot good
and not enough information
and ur essay isn;t organised enough
hi amany your essay is not organised you need to edit it .your information is good and your ideas is varied but it need to be organised
ردحذفhi amany your essay has clear and direct words.
ردحذفyoyr essay maintains a consistent tone.
sorry amany but your essay is not organized.
the information is not enough, you have to read more about this topic.
amany ur quertions gave ur essay vitality. -you have cconsistent tone through ur essay -ur purpose iz not clear. ~ur sentences are long . -ur organisation of ur essay is not good: you may use one paragraph on introduction_causes_effects_solutions_conclusion OR introduction_one cause and its effect_second _third_solutions_conclusion.
ردحذف* you made your audience want to complete your essay by the questions .
ردحذف* your essay have a consistant tone and you did noy change your mind through out the essay .
* your purpose is not clear you defined air pollution and its types away from causes and effects .
* your sentences are too long .
* you have to organize your essay according to :
you may use -one paragraph on introduction,causes, effects , solutions ,and conclusion .
or
-introduction , 1st cause paragraph and its effect , 2nd cause paragraph and its effect ,3rd cause paragraph and its effect ,sollutions ,and conclusion .
occur naturally orartificiall(or artificially)
ردحذفThe first major cause of air pollution is car exhausts whichformed (which are formed) due to
military activities ara (are) one of the main causes that involve the use of nuclear weapons that pollute air.
Symptoms of air pollution exposure include irritation to one’s eyes, throat, and lungs. , headaches, and difficulty breathing are all commonly reported when air quality is poor (wrong structure).
i think that (capitalize)
and the greenhouse effect problem becoming more and more of a threat (wrong structure)
*you have to give more information
ردحذف*your words are simple and clear
your style of writing is not organized