the educational system in my country(first draft

  Economic poverty, poor health,  and poor levels of education are the most serious issues facing Egypt today, but the worst of all is the lack of proper education. If a child doesn’t have an access to an educational system that takes him through ajourney of self discovery and understanding of the world around him, then he won’t be able to grow up into a healthy, mature and active citizen in his society. Education, inmy opinion, is the process whereby we cultivate our intellect knowledge and wisdom,but the notion of education in Egypt is the memorization and ability to quote monstrous, comprehensive bulks of information and reiterate them in the exam paper. Education is literally ‘stuffing’ young brains with masses of data incomprehensible to those minds . 

   

   The only purpose of education is to teach a student how to live his life-by developing his mind and equipping him to deal with reality. The training he needs is theoretical, i.e., conceptual. He has to be taught to think, to understand, to integrate, to prove. He has to be taught the essentials of the knowledge discovered in the past-and he has to be equipped to acquire further knowledge by his own effort.education should fulfil some objectives: first, to improve the level of general knowledge and culture among students. The second objective is to build the personalities of students, allowing them to become more independent, more creative and more capable of thinking freely, of making decisions and of developing autonomously. Sadly, Egyptian university graduates are capable only of waiting for orders and executing them. No thinking, no arguing, no questioning; no objecting and not even dialoguing.Every human should want to be educated, because the world is full of technology which influences our world greatly. People who are not educated enough will surely be uniformed and left behind in today’s society. Technology is in business officers, schools, hospitals, doctor offices, stores, homes, and many other places. Today, the school systems start off with teaching the students how to use computers . The students are using this knowledge that they have learned from school and relating it to their parents.  Teachers are a gift to students and parents because they are teaching the students everything that there is to learn about education. Without teachers, students will not learn the knowledge they need to succeed in this world without a good education.

   

   

       Egypt's  education needs an overhaul as high school teaching, based mostly on rote, does not give students practical skills, leaving them unprepared for college and later the workplace, according to the country's teachers and employers. Overcrowded classrooms, poor attendance and a lack of good libraries or office space for teachers are problems that run through the system from the earliest years to final classes. Facilities like computers and science labs are often rundown if they exist at all in state schools, they added..It seems to me that the problem with education in Egypt is not the curriculum, but the students. Most students in Egypt rely on private lessons and tutors to get their education instead of their school teachers. This results in minimal school attendance. The students merely go to take their exams. With less and less students showing up for classes, the teachers were bound to lose interest at some point. And they did. With students and teachers losing interest and becoming less enthusiastic about the classroom, administration and school boards began losing interest too. The product of all this is the current education problem in Egypt. The problem is not the curriculum. The real problem is the lack of interest and care that is exhibited from both the students and teachers alike.
   
           There are some suggest solutions for improving the educational system in Egypt.Many education reform efforts focus on curriculum, the knowledge and skills that we want students to learn. These efforts tend to emphasize higher order thinking skills (such as problem solving) and connections to the world beyond the classroom. In contrast, the more traditional curriculum tends to focus on basic skills and academic subjects as they have historically been presented in schools. The development of standards is one of the most prominent features of the education reform landscape.Standards have been developed for many academic areas defining what students should know and be able to do at different grade levels.Traditional curricula tend to emphasize memorization and repetitious practice of basic skills.Many curriculum reform efforts promote a greater focus on skills such as logical analysis and problem solving

• In the past, it was not considered essential that all students learn rigorous content; many jobs were available for students with minimal academic skill. In today's information age, jobs that used to require low levels of reading and mathematical skill now require the worker to use and understand 1,000 page technical manuals and computer-assisted diagnosis and treatment of job-related problems. Statistics shows that people with a great education are much more successful than those who do not receive a great education. Many people who graduate from high school and college are guaranteed to get a better job and higher position than those who have never finish their high school or college education.
   

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the educational system in my country(out line

-What is the meaning of education ? 

--What is the meaning of education in egypt? 

--What is the purpuse of education? 

  -What is the importance of education ? 

  -What is the problems of education in egypt ? 

  -How can solve the problems of education ? 

  - What is the role of students towards this problem ?

woman's work

O        One of the most significant sociological changes in the nation's history began in the last decade of the nineteenth century and the ramifications are still being felt today. This change consisted of the large numbers of women who entered the work force. Today women and men's right are equal in the United States of America but, in early societies there was a difference in the treatment of men and women, Women cared for the home, and helped maintain the family's economic production. Their education was limited to learning domestic skills. There were no chances of women getting an education then because no college or university would accept a female with only a few exceptions, and they had no access to positions of power, They were not allowed to enter professions such as medicine or law. They thought they were totally dependent on men. For the Industrial Revolution women were a really important role. This was the beginning of their independence,

                                                                                                                                                                                                      Recently, many women are engaged in various kinds of job, and they have been advancing in society.many people believed that   woman should work outside the home to get money ,and  support the family needs because of both men and women should have equal share of their family responsibilities.However, nowadays, there are vast amounts of places where women can work. In most cases, the wages earned by the man cant support the entire family;so woman go to work , but there are many women who work to acheive self-realization to prove their right to be equal to men .they want to play an important role in soceity ,to buy every thing theywant by their own money .Working mothers, who are more educated, can assist their children with homework, and talk about world issues. I also think that caring about children doesnt only mean parents stay with children for long time, but parents also have to help their children when they really need their parents help. For instance, my mother has been working in an office since I was a child; however, she has always given me good advice and led me to be a responsible person. Even though I havent had much time with my mother, I didnt take the wrong way because of her advice and care.

     many people argue that a woman's rightful place in society is in the home as her duty to take care of the man and his children within the home. They believed that women should be confined in the household, and men should work outside because woman's work could cause many problems, which cause pernicious effects on society.They argue that women can't endure work, which requires physical strength so that they are not suitable for outside workBecause factory work requires physical strength, in my estimation, women have proven that they too can endure manual labor.they also wrongfully blame the womens work outside the home as the cause deterring men from getting jobs and kids from growing up the right way,and The men, dont find jobs because women have taken those jobs. . In my opinion, the reason they cant find jobs because is due to their inferior abilities compared to some women; therefore, the blame shouldnt be placed on all women, and the men should be more competitive. Furthermore, the men should strive not to fall behind the womens ability. ,andChildren takes the wrong way because they have the feeling that their father and mothers ignore them.

  

        I agree with women's work if she can make balance between work ,and her family life .. They should go outside to work and show men what they can contribute to the society and their family. Therefore, working outside home for women should be encouraged and facilitated to every family in the world.

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 Introduction  

Recently, many women are engaged in various kinds of job, and they have been advancing in society.  

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        -why do people agree with woman's work ?  

     -Getting money . 

     -Supporting the family needs. 

     -Self-realization.  

     -Equal sharing with man in thier family responsibilities.  

    

        -Why do people against woman's work ?  

     -Woman's rightful place in society is in home . 

     -Woman's work have taken man's jobs.  

     -Some works require physical health . 

     -Not taking care of husband and children. 

     

     Conclusion  

    I agree with women's work if she can make balance between work ,and her family life . 

  

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final draft

Air pollution is not anew topic .it is aproblem that we have noticed since the industrial revolution , when trees, houses and cars were covered in soot from the factories.

 Air pollution, which is normally defined as harmful substances in atmosphere can has a series of effects on human health as well as the whole environment and it has already become a global issue. Human activities, such as industries, motor transportation and household activities, play a significant role in producing air pollutants. Furthermore, human health is  suffering fromdifferent diseases related to air pollution, varying from breathing problem to lung cancer

there are major causes of air pollution such as industrialization, and transportation

With rapid growth of industries and economy, air pollution becomes a worldwide problem, especially in developing countries. The quick industrialization  is usually accompanied by much more factories                       

Every day factories release a large amount of poisonous gases and fumes in the air.  that are considered harmful to health, because it decrease the amount of oxygen in the air raising our blood pressure and heart pulse so high which lead to shortness of breath and diseases. 

The second cause of air pollution is car exhausts which are formed due to  the production of unburned fuel in the form of oxides of Nitrogen and hydrocarbonsAlso Nitrogen oxides. Basically Nitrogen oxide is one of the harmful gases which is produced into the atmosphere due to various human activities such as burning of fuel. military activities are one of the main causes that involve the use of nuclear weapons that pollute air. An even bigger source of pollution comes from the most needed and useful device, the cell phones! That help people in many ways, such as saving time and effort. 

  

Air pollution has wide adverse effects on the environment and man in general.   People have no choice but to breathe the air around them regardless of its quality.   there are serious .       Symptoms of air pollution  include irritation to one’s eyes, throat, lungs,headaches, and difficulty breathing. in addition to it reduced energy levels , disrupting the balance of nature, and leading to premature death. Air pollution does not only affect people but it also damages the whole ecological system in which plants and animals are harmed as well. Air pollution has reached such a critical stage where it affects the earth's atmosphere as it lets in more harmful radiation from the sun.That is why there is a global rise in temperature which scientists refer to as " global warming". As a result of this rise in temperature the world food supply and sea level will be affected, also there is the probability of increase in the tropical disease

 Its true that factories give us a successful economy system but on the other hand they give us air pollution too. To avoid air pollution and still keep the factories, we can use natural powers like water and sun to run our factories.Although people have no choice but to breath the air around them, they do have choices that can help them stay healthy. Paying attention to air quality forecasts,  avoiding outside exercise or spending more time inside when ozone levels are high, and supporting measures to improve air quality and reduce sources of pollutionare all  commendable and health-saving measures .I think that the solution is to save energy

 by trying to use minimum amounts of natural gas and even electricity, and avoiding the use of air conditioner and use a fan instead.    

After all, these problems can be solved in many ways, but starting with self-solving, meaning every individual should take this solution into action or compromise. After that, the national health system and the environmental system should take actions by publicizing measures of protection and safety towards the environment Air pollution is a problem that everyone should be concerned about.we need to avoid the use  of fire crackers that dont really need it to express our feeling of happiness , and also try reusing things such as paper , and plastic bags , this will contribute towards reducing the effects of air pollution and global warming.                                                                                                                                                                                               

 

Air pollution

 Air pollution is a worldwide problem. What is air pollution? It's the introduction of harmful substances or products into the enviroment which can occur naturally orartificiall 


y.t here are two types of airpollution (primary )such as vehicle exaust , and secondary such as smog. Air pollution is a dangerous threat caused by many different productions such as: car exhaust, Nitrogen Oxides and has a serious effect on us


 The first major cause of air pollution is car exhausts whichformed due to
 the production of unburned fuel in the form of oxides of Nitrogen and hydrocarbons.  The 

second cause of air pollution is Nitrogenoxides. Basically Nitrogen oxide is one of the harmful gases which is produced into the atmosphere due to various humanactivities such as burning of fuel. military activities ara one of the main causes that involve the use of nuclear weaponsthat pollute air.

Air pollution has wide adverse effects on the environment and man in general.   People have no choice but to breathe the air around them regardless of its quality.  Symptoms of air pollution exposure include irritation to one’s eyes, throat, and lungs. , headaches, and difficulty breathing are all commonly reported when air quality is poor. in addition to it reduced energy levels , disrupting the balance of nature, and leading to premature death.


Although people have no choice but to breath the air around them, they do have choices that can help them stay healthy. Paying attention to air quality forecasts,  
avoiding outside exercise or spending more time inside when ozone levels are high, and supporting measures to improve air quality and reduce sources of pollution are all  commendable and health-saving measures. i think that the solution isto save energy by trying to use minimum amountsof natural gas and even electricity, and avoidinf thr use of air conditioner and use afan instead.


 Air pollution is a problem that everyone should be concerned about. With the growing number of automobiles, and the greenhouse effect problem becoming more and more of a threat   


air,pollution is something to be concerned with
we need to avoid the use  of fire crackers that dont really need it to express our feeling of happiness , and also try reusing things such as paper , and plastic bags , this will contribute towards reducing the effects of air pollution and global warming.

introduction

what is pollution and its types-

-definition of air pollution

types of air pollution-

primary

Secondary

-causes of air pollution

a-the main pollutants that causes air pollution  

carbon dioxid  nitrogen oxides,sulfur oxides, and hydrocarbons

b-the burning of fossil fuels

c-automobiles

d-military activities

e-he industrialization of society

-effects of pollution in egypt

1-physical effects

a-reducing lung functioning

irrating of eyes , nose,mouse, and throat

b-reducing energy levels  

c-leading to premature death and cancer

2 biological effects

a-destroying vegetationthat provides food and shelter

b-distributing the balance of nature

solutions

a-saving energy

b-avoiding the use of air conditionerand using afan instead always buy recycled

 products

c-reusing things such as paper , and plastic bags

conclusion

this will contribute towards reducing the effects of air pollution and global warming